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You Lost Me

BY: @anarkia | CREATED: Feb. 1, 2025, 3:22 p.m. | VOTES: 7 | PAYOUT: $0.12 | [ VOTE ]

You lost me.

When you held her hand instead of mine
Your souls been intertwined
And here I am shocked by the news
Cause you'd be tying the knot in a month or two

I've written countless songs for you
Songs of love, longing, heartbreak and in blues
I promised myself to not make no more
Yet now I feel the need to

I've loved you for so long yet you didn't gave me chance
And so I was broken, did things God couldn't understand
But a few years went by and I met this guy
And all of the sudden he turned my grey skies into white

I loved him so dearly, and I would want him forever
But when I saw you getting married to a girl that I never knew you would come to love
I felt numb and depressed whatsoever
I was in the verge of crying, my heart almost stopped

But there is nothing I could do
I hate seeing you happy, I really do
Cause that proposal could've been me and you
But you didn't chose me, and neither did I chose you.

You lost me.

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Hi everybody. How's it going? It has been a while since I've made some short poetry on the spot here on Hive, and it felt good releasing some stress off my chest. haha. I hope you enjoy reading this, cause I almost cried making it. HAHA. I plan to make some song out of it in the future, too. Well, anyway, enjoy.

TAGS: [ #poetry ] [ #creativecoin ] [ #ocd ] [ #freewriter ] [ #blockchainpoets ] [ #creativewriting ] [ #love ] [ #heartbroken ]

Replies

@graveyardpat | Feb. 1, 2025, 3:54 p.m. | Votes: 1 | [ VOTE ]

This is quite neat! I like how it spans a longer time of years, rather than just describing one brief little moment. Also I love the brutal honesty of "I hate seeing you happy, I really do." That's somethin' else.
Really nice!

@anarkia | Feb. 1, 2025, 4:12 p.m. | Votes: 1 | [ VOTE ]

Thank you so much for the appreciation! 😍 This was my first love and I've loved him for about 7 years straight. Hahaha but we never got together though. Guess he didn't liked me at all.

And yeah I really hated his smile when I saw his post about the proposal. Hahahahaha

@graveyardpat | Feb. 1, 2025, 5:21 p.m. | Votes: 1 | [ VOTE ]

Oof... that sounds rough. Sorry you had to deal with that. ❤️‍🩹

@anarkia | Feb. 1, 2025, 6:34 p.m. | Votes: 1 | [ VOTE ]

Its totally fine 😅 That was years ago already. Also, I got my own man right now and I love him so much. Its just that the “first love never dies” thing really does not fade away that easily even if you’re in a relationship. 😅

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