__________     __ __     __  _______    ________
  / ____/ __ \   / // /    / / / /  _/ |  / / ____/
 / / __/ / / /  / // /_   / /_/ // / | | / / __/
/ /_/ / /_/ /  /__  __/  / __  // /  | |/ / /___
\____/\____/     /_/    /_/ /_/___/  |___/_____/

 --- A GOPHER-LIKE INTERFACE FOR HIVE BLOCKCHAIN ---

MY HATE FOR YOU

BY: @cadwell | CREATED: Feb. 15, 2018, 7:40 a.m. | VOTES: 6 | PAYOUT: $0.09 | [ VOTE ]

[IMAGE: https://steemitimages.com/DQmRnQommUggyYR1CXgRQwj7J6Aft9RJjrrnHnLSD2rAt9A/creation-2188472_960_720.jpg]

The things you did to me
Took away what made me free and special
I was your prisoner
tied up in chains.

You played me like a puzzle piece in a game.
you messed with my feelings like it doesnt matter,
and all night i keep wondering why?
How could you do this to me?
where i went wrong?

All this pain and misery
Your ugly soul brought upon me.
How do you live with yourself?
Knowing how much you've negatively affected me,
Took the things I never had.
Turned me around, and slit me with a knife.
I never thought this would happen to me,
But WOAH!! it just did.

I'll never forget,
I'll never forgive.
And all this pain I went through
Was just because I trusted you.
told you a part of me nobody knew
You took advantage of me,
Took control of my whole body.
My hate for you will never fade.

TAGS: [ #poetry ] [ #lgbt ] [ #life ] [ #hate ] [ #community ]

Replies

@poetrybyjeremy | Feb. 15, 2018, 9:41 a.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

There is a lot of disappointment and anger in this. I quite like it. I would suggest possibly using fewer questions. Imagery like
>Turned me around, and slit me with a knife

speak a lot by themselves. It shows how someone backstabbed you and broke your trust, how hurt you must have felt. Good job.

@cadwell | Feb. 15, 2018, 3:32 p.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

Thanks alot.

[ BACK TO TRENDING ] [ BACK TO MENU ]
CMD>