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TERALI

BY: @daentepi | CREATED: May 22, 2018, 10:51 a.m. | VOTES: 13 | PAYOUT: $0.46 | [ VOTE ]

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Selamat sore menjelang berbuka sahabat steemian. Semoga masih tetap kuat berpuasa hari ini. Kali ini saya ingin berbagi tulisan dalam bentuk puisi. Sangat ringkas tetapi mewakili kejadian beberapa hari ini.

TERALI

Benar, aku juga pemenang
Terbang bebas di bawah ilusi
Menapak jejak pendahulu
Menirukan gestur pengalih ketidaktahuan

Benar, aku pun membiru
Menentang jiwa di ujung layar
Terdesak di area lapang
Terkenang riwayat di mata pendatang

Benar, aku lah saksi
Kegusaran yang tidak tersalurkan
Membendung semakin tinggi
Memendam kata dari sanubari, maaf

Benar, aku lah terali
Jeruji bening tanpa kunci dan penyekat
Melanglang lepas dalam kotak prosedur
Menegakkan ego, mendiamkan simpati

Calang, 22 May 2018
Created by @daentepi

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TAGS: [ #poetry ] [ #indonesia ] [ #life ] [ #aceh ] [ #poem ]

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@khaimi | May 22, 2018, 11:52 a.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

Saya bukan ahli puisi.. Namun dari kata yang mengalir menyibakkan arti yang sangat mendalam. Akhir kata saya cuma bisa berkata

Selamat berbuka puasa.

😂😂😂

@daentepi | May 22, 2018, 1:05 p.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

Hahaha guru lon, Pak @khaimi. Memahami puisi tidak harus menjadi ahli. Tinggal baca 😉
Selamat teraweh pak 😉

@djamidjalal | May 22, 2018, 12:57 p.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

Kemana aja bang. Jadi rindu.

@daentepi | May 22, 2018, 1:06 p.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

Sudah lama tidak buka steemit, Bang @djamidjalal. Selamat berpuasa ya 😉😁

@djamidjalal | May 22, 2018, 1:20 p.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

Itulah. Kami rindu ni. Haa
Selamat berpuasa juga untuk abang.

@hamdanirz | May 22, 2018, 3:30 p.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

Benar, saya bukanlah ahli kata puisi berjuta makna
Meniru apa yang dikatakan saudara @khaimi, khak ....khak ...khak arti mendalam.

Benar juga, aku melihatmu seperti terali
Jeruji yang berdiri tegak dan meagungkan prosedur.
Mengabaikan simpati dan mengutamakan empati
Seraya memohon maaf bila hubungan (pelayanan) meleset dari kata cinta
Yang tetap meneguhkan prinsip kebenaran.
Benar, kamu harus tetap bergerak dan menepi dititik berjuta kebahagiaan dan senyuman

Mencoba memberikan feedback dengan kata puisi yang gagal nalar, he he he
Sukses terus @daentepi

@minnowsupport | May 22, 2018, 9:19 p.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

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