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"Blind Date" a five minute #freewrite

BY: @felt.buzz | CREATED: April 9, 2018, 6:24 p.m. | VOTES: 15 | PAYOUT: $0.45 | [ VOTE ]

Thank you @mariannewest for another fabulous #freewrite challenge, today's prompt is texas

To learn more and take part visit https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-172-5-minute-freewrite-wednesday-prompt-texas

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"Have you ever been to Texas?" she asks, in what I assume is a real Texan drawl.

"No," I say, smiling and fidgeting with the beer mat. I hate small talk. Not for the first time, I wonder why I agreed to come out on this date.

"It'll be fun," Dana said. "I know this girl, she'll be into you for sure. And it'll be good for her to meet a 'normal' guy for a change." She didn't do air-quotes around the word "normal", but I could hear them. I am used to it. People often use them when they refer to me. I think they think it is some kind of compliment.

To be almost normal, but not quite.

Dana comes back carrying two pints. Her idiot-of-a-date carries the other two. He smiles as he puts my pint down on the table in front of me. Beer sloshes out onto the table. I wince at the wasted ale. I hate waste. Particularly when it comes to alcohol.

"Mary-Lou," I say, a smile forced upon my lips. "Was just telling me about Texas, weren't you?" I look at my date.

She looks at me blankly.

"Who is Mary-Lou?" she says...

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Replies

@freedomtowrite | April 9, 2018, 6:43 p.m. | Votes: 1 | [ VOTE ]

Ha! That was great!

Can you please do this one outloud too? And add voices? Haha

@storytllng.rocks | April 9, 2018, 9:56 p.m. | Votes: 2 | [ VOTE ]

You're right, this would be a great group author reading!

@felt.buzz | April 10, 2018, 6:09 a.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

There's an idea!

@freedomtowrite | April 10, 2018, 11:50 a.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

Originally, I was hoping to hear @felt.buzz sound like a Texan woman...haha...but this would make a great multi-person read!

@storytllng.rocks | April 10, 2018, 3:25 p.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

LOL! He can work on that, I guess ;)

@felt.buzz | April 10, 2018, 6:08 a.m. | Votes: 2 | [ VOTE ]

So you can laugh at my impression of a Texas drawl? I think not!* ;)

*maybe! ;=

@freedomtowrite | April 10, 2018, 11:51 a.m. | Votes: 1 | [ VOTE ]

That's really what I was hoping for! Haha

@storytllng.rocks | April 9, 2018, 9:55 p.m. | Votes: 1 | [ VOTE ]

This is amazing! I loved particularly the airquotes scene, I could so relate ...

@felt.buzz | April 10, 2018, 6:10 a.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

Thank you! :)

@mini-zephalexia | April 10, 2018, 2:23 a.m. | Votes: 1 | [ VOTE ]

nice short story our dear @felt.buzz ❤️❤️❤️

@felt.buzz | April 10, 2018, 6:10 a.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

Thank you! :)

@honeydue | April 10, 2018, 10:14 p.m. | Votes: 1 | [ VOTE ]

> To be almost normal, but not quite.

I so love this! And the whole story, you make things so vivid, @felt.buzz, always a lovely read <3

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