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Looking Out My Window

BY: @jen8 | CREATED: July 28, 2017, 4:40 a.m. | VOTES: 8 | PAYOUT: $0.24 | [ VOTE ]

[IMAGE: https://steemitimages.com/DQmRuXf9XJn9N4uNgPvgj7fTiuH8qKwRCxVz12m4cUhyMaX/window.jpg]
The beautiful sunshine,
Adorns the glistening lake, trees and plants,
That move in unison along with the wind.
Such wonderful and marvellous dreams,
Float effortlessly along,
In the open world.
All this I can see,
Yet I’m still not,
A complete part of it.
As I sit alone in my room,
Cut off from the rest of the world,
Looking out my window.

TAGS: [ #poetry ] [ #poem ] [ #writing ]

Replies

@greatdabu | July 28, 2017, 6:05 a.m. | Votes: 1 | [ VOTE ]

Well said. I like this :)

@jen8 | July 28, 2017, 6:43 a.m. | Votes: 1 | [ VOTE ]

Thank you :)

@positivesteem | July 28, 2017, 6:21 a.m. | Votes: 1 | [ VOTE ]

The beauty of nature is well captured in your poem. I also write poems as well.
Spreading Positivity One Post At A Time

@jen8 | July 28, 2017, 6:44 a.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

Thanks for your feedback! I'll check out your poem and follow your future work.

@positivesteem | July 28, 2017, 4:46 p.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

Thanks, following you as well.

@akareem | July 28, 2017, 6:56 a.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

Very beautiful written upvoted
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DFjAt6LUQAEwgFb?format=jpg&name=large

@jen8 | July 29, 2017, 12:38 a.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

Thanks

@akareem | July 29, 2017, 6:40 a.m. | Votes: 3 | [ VOTE ]

Try visiting my blog sometime if you can .. thanks

@jen8 | July 30, 2017, 12:51 a.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

Yes for sure, you bet!

@mattbadura | July 28, 2017, 7:14 a.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

I like your poem, all though a bit sad, hope all is well :)

@jen8 | July 29, 2017, 12:40 a.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

Thanks. Yes, this one is a bit sad. That's one of the things that I like about poetry....it lets you express the full range of human emotion and experience.

@mattbadura | July 29, 2017, 3:58 a.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

I would agree with that :)

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