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Parable

BY: @johnjgeddes | CREATED: Nov. 28, 2018, 7:58 p.m. | VOTES: 35 | PAYOUT: $0.72 | [ VOTE ]

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The white field
Silent and
Peaceful

Crossed
By hare tracks
In the snow

Waits for me
In stuttering
Clarity

Spins yarns
Of wet snow flurries

Startled rooks
Rise suddenly
Then quickly
Subside—

The dumb show
A parable
Of our brief human lives.

© 2018, John J Geddes. All rights reserved

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Replies

@billykeed | Nov. 28, 2018, 8:02 p.m. | Votes: 1 | [ VOTE ]

parable indeed. good piece.

@johnjgeddes | Nov. 28, 2018, 9:20 p.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

Thanks, Billy :)

@minnowsupporter | Nov. 29, 2018, 2:47 a.m. | Votes: 3 | [ VOTE ]

there is really something to pick up from this

@johnjgeddes | Nov. 29, 2018, 4:07 a.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

thanks

@creatr | Nov. 29, 2018, 8:25 a.m. | Votes: 1 | [ VOTE ]

Yes, there are surely parables in all that we see around us... ;)

😄😇😄

@johnjgeddes | Dec. 1, 2018, 5:27 a.m. | Votes: 1 | [ VOTE ]

so true...Thanks @creatr

@awgbibb | Nov. 29, 2018, 10 a.m. | Votes: 1 | [ VOTE ]

We all want to have our Pyramid , just something for others to stare at when we are gone.

@johnjgeddes | Dec. 1, 2018, 5:28 a.m. | Votes: 1 | [ VOTE ]

exactly! Thanks, Alan

@nemosum | Nov. 30, 2018, 3:06 a.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

> Waits for me
In stuttering
Clarity

i love this line

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