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Fifty-Word Challenge Entry...

BY: @puppetmaster1111 | CREATED: April 30, 2018, 9:53 p.m. | VOTES: 7 | PAYOUT: $1.13 | [ VOTE ]

Astral Travel

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Close your eyes and let the astral winds raise you up. Concentrate now, there is no need to fear.

Like a feather without a wing, you are lifted and carried; Light as air, quietly breathing.

Just allow.

Take in the sights, sounds, smells.

When your eyes open, the journey ends.

This is my entry into this weeks "Fifty-Word Challenge" hosted by @jayna:
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@jayna/fifty-word-challenge-results-and-a-fresh-prompt

This weeks word prompt is "Wing"

TAGS: [ #fiftywords ] [ #writing ] [ #story ] [ #contest ] [ #poem ]

Replies

@creatr | May 2, 2018, 5:19 p.m. | Votes: 1 | [ VOTE ]

Ah, how I would love to fly!

Thanks.

😄😇😄

@puppetmaster1111 | May 2, 2018, 6:48 p.m. | Votes: 1 | [ VOTE ]

Me too @creatr, I dream about it sometimes...

@jayna | May 4, 2018, 7:56 p.m. | Votes: 1 | [ VOTE ]

This is very poetic, @puppetmaster1111! It's lovely.

@puppetmaster1111 | May 4, 2018, 11 p.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

Thank you @jayna :)

@anikekirsten | May 4, 2018, 8:23 p.m. | Votes: 1 | [ VOTE ]

At first read, it seemed a story about a metaphysical journey. But on reading again, I get the sense this goes deeper. A metaphor perhaps of life. Got me thinking, and that's what stories should do. Nicely done.

@puppetmaster1111 | May 4, 2018, 11:03 p.m. | Votes: 0 | [ VOTE ]

I'm glad you were able to go beneath the surface @anikekirsten; Thank you for your comment :)

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