Ohh yeah I remember this one. Even at that time I find her story pretty compelling, so you should definitely write it down one of these days, spider ^_^.          
                     
On the current version, I can see better highlights and shadows on the picture, especially on the water and the sky, so I definitely think that you have improved the picture by inking it :D          
                     
Good job :).          
                     
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Thank you, @scrawly ! I am glad you remembered her :)

As always, you drop it as it is hot.

That's it. The more we draw as time goes on, the better we become and when we look back to our former drawings, we realized how naive and inexperience we were.

Yeah! That is very true :D I sometimes look back at my older arts and feel the urge to touch them up with my current skill levels, hahaha :D

Lol...just lets it be so that you can laugh at yourself and remember when you were still an amateur. It's always nice.

i really really love this <3

Thank you @haiyentree <3

wow her face on the other hand looks really innocent

She doesn't realize what she's doing, that's why !! aaah!

She seems to hide a secret hahaha !! The final result is very beautiful :-*

Thank you @paokarinat :D She does have a terrible secret !!

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She looks so lovely, but has a very fierce gaze! :D The story fits her very well hehe :S

I remember when you initially posted this, really glad to see it inked now, she stands out so much more now ^-^

The white little details are really cool, I was looking for a pen like that now I want it even more :D

Yes, you and me both, kristy ! I wish I have a pen that can do highlights in real also ! :D

Haha you got me xD I should try some digital highlights haha. But yeah you definitely can do real highlights but the pens are hard to find.

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There's a lot I want to say, but my English really is not very good. :c

That is very true, @marysc :) It is important to enjoy your creativity ! :D

Your english comes across really good to me <3

Great draw and great progress too ^^
i'm glad to see you have improved very well in your draws.

also, though she is on a trance, her expression also show some sadness :(
poor people and poor woman. I wonder if she is able to remember when she murders a person .-.

Thank you, danya <3 She is a tragic character :(

She is so sad but lovely

Thank you, @zpzn !!!

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beautiful drawing @veryspider <3

Thank you, @li-art <3

i like your style @veryspider , :) nice work

thank you, @adelepazani <3

A beautiful drawing that I like it <3

Thank you, @napa !!!

I love how moody this is and I always relate to a female form in a long gown on the seashore, it just fits me to a tee, so I'm even more enamored of this one. :)

Aaah thank you so much, donna <3

Love the artwork, and the story! Very moody and dark :-)

Thank you! Hahaha, I usually make brighter topics, but sometimes the dark topics are very alluring, also...